Dark

2 in loops and then two for one guitar test take lok=l

This was meant to be the first finished product of Arachnid but I fucked up the chorus. I lead into it, but not out of it so the chorus is abruptly back into the verses.

So because of this I didn't zoom in and set the beg. chorus chord strikes with end verse chord strikes. So that will seem muddy.

Other than that I am happy with:
Verse123 Lead Left
Verse1 Lead/Rhy Right
Verse123 RhyFig

Chorus Hybrid Picking

Chorus&Verse123 Vocals
Chorus&Verse Lyrics

Everything except the hiss and the right. I didn't sing loud enough for my mic to eliminate it.
The ight lead sounded much better on other tracks. I dunno.

Lyrics
(Five opening notes)
There is a blind man on the corner
Screaming that hes not insane
He sees the world in rhythm and beat
Hes the man that I wanna be
Says break right through the web to safety
Theres no reasont o be caught int he dark with me

I am the light in the darkness
look to me and you'll burn your eyes
but I will, free you from the darkness
And the arachnids terrible web of lies
I am the fire in the darkness
Look to me

You've got the shacklets on your arms
The devils wily charms
You are so enslaved
I'd love you see you brave
The world through the darkness
and the web
The spiders poisons pain will ebb
Do not be alojne

I am the light in the darkness
look to me and you'll burn your eyes
but I will, free you from the darkness
And the arachnid's terrible web of lies
I am the fire in the darkness
Look to me

You'll never gues what the blind man told me,
Said he saw a puddle of blood at your feet.
I know that you cut open your veins
Try to cut the spiders out
Thats insane
Just come to the light
Fire in the darkness

(Outro lead)

This was writen for a black girl I know. It is racial and should be ignored. Don't listen. Thanks!

This is the same song. I just did the vocals and the guitar in a seperate take. And then did another vocals take. Did some gentle panning after playing with the guitar part and then did some heavier panning on the vocals. This is my version of a "produced song." I tried to keep the lyrics about the same to keep the feel of the song the same. Of course the guitar mutated slightly, as I could think about the taps a bit more.

The taps being important because the kid in the song is slapping a coffin. :/ oh well. Later.


Edit:

Original Song with approximated lyrics in the second/third post:
http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/5772.html

One man, one mic, one take. Just six chords with some arpeggios made up as the song progressed, lyrics also made up as the song progressed, save the few lines I had in my head before I started recording.



Edit:


Lyrics down two posts,
A version where the vocals and guitar were done in seperate takes...
http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/5775.html